First Draft of Film

This is our first attempt at editing. For a start, I think this look good. The shots are creepy and mysterious (exactly what I wanted when I talked about the mystery box theory) & it's a solid foundation to build on further. I think after this we will go into the title sequence with music and industrial sounds. However, the colour of the shots are way too bright for the effect we're going for, so this needs to change. In addition,  I think the music is way too loud. What would be more effective here is subtle background noise that's not noticable but audible.